Dialogue

CREATING EFFECTIVE DIALOGUE Take a look at this example of [|vivid dialogue] form my friend Kristine's blog! What makes it effective?

Let's look at what a difference detail can make in dialogue. Here's a basic one, no bells or whistles:

“Mom? Do you have a minute?”

“What do you need, Honey?”

“Can I go out tonight?”

“Are you going with Chris?”

“Yes. Who else would it be?”

“Don’t back talk me, young lady.”

“Sorry, Mom.”